Case #4 Thesis Development
Workshop
Here are some premise-conclusion
enthymemes taken from our basic case source. Read each one and think
about it for a moment. Then, free-write in response to it for three
minutes. What have you discovered about your response to its logic and
thesis? When you are done, which piece of free-writing are you most
impressed by in terms of its promise for further growth. Make that your
thesis and continue to write about it for the Friday rough-draft conferences.
Students responding to the U.S. Department of Education study:
- [Presumed premise: Drug use is bad only if you take drugs "to get
high"--drugs used to improve your health or mental performance are all
good.]
- Conclusion: I take mind-enhancing drugs "to help me with my problems"
or "to help me with specific tasks," so they are good.
Richard Restak, on overall safety and legal use:
- [Supply the presumed premise(s):
]
- "We're going to see it not only in schools, but in businesses,
especially where mental endurance matters."
Premises with implied conclusions [supply the conclusions] and conclusions
with implied premises [supply the premise(s)]:
- "[I]t's medicine parents give to 8-year-olds, . . . brand-name stuff,
in precise dosages."
- "In the name of altering mood, energy and thinking patterns, we have
been marinating our brains in chemicals for a very long time."
- "Beta blockers have been the dirty little secret of classical
musicians since the 1970s" . . . "when it became clear Inderol controlled
stage fright."
- "Why should they be taking drugs? They should just study!
I think this is absurd. What's so terrible about having a 3.9?" (Eric
R. Kandel)
- "There are lots of populations out there that really, really need
help." (Eric R. Kandel re: people with memory loss due to Down
syndrome, chronic depression, Alzeheimer's, chemotherapy, or schizophrenia)