Typical
Stages in Critical Argument
or
What
your academic audience is asking from the other side of the page
While talking to a writer who confessed to being a strongly aural/oral
learner, preferring composition by conversation rather than silent writing, I
realized that she could invent her own mental "Arnie" with whom to
talk when she was writing alone. This
also might benefit you more visual
types out there. Academic readers
bring a predictable set of responses to papers' theses and supporting evidence.
If you can ask yourselves these questions and answer them at each new
stage of the paper, you'll probably anticipate
their most important concerns.
1) INTRODUCTION,
Stage 1: What text are you working with and what do
you want me to believe about this text? (Answer:
state your thesis.)
2) INTRODUCTION,
Stage 2: Why
should I believe it? (Answer: tell
me briefly where you will find your evidence in the text, itself, as well as from the author's life,
the historical context, etc., as appropriate, and
a review of recently published scholarly
literature to lay out what other scholars have recently said about the author,
text, passage(s) or even the issue you are writing about it, whether they
support or oppose your position)
3) BODY,
"PRO": How
should I understand this evidence? (Answer:
reading the primary source evidence carefully, interpret the significance of the evidence by explaining what it implies,
what its consequences or causes seem to be, or what it tells us about the
author's larger, more secret intentions for the work.)
4) BODY,
"CON": Is this
the only or best way to understand this evidence?
In what contrary ways might the significance of this evidence be
understood? Is there evidence that does
not fit the thesis you argue? (Answer: present the contrary
evidence or explanatory alternatives you can think of, or that other critics have proposed--other
critics' opinions also can be introduced here if they've touched upon your paper's
topic.) [In rare instances, this does not need to be brought up, but
please try out your argument on me first before assuming this is the case!]
5) BODY, REBUTTAL
of "CON": Why
should I prefer your interpretation of the evidence to those other ones?
How can we explain the evidence that violates the pattern you are
describing? (Answer: compare the explanations and show how the one you propose
explains the evidence more accurately, explains more of the work, explains the
evidence in ways that resemble more the other things the author has done, and/or
requires fewer unlikely hypotheses than the explanations offered by the
others. Remember that exceptions to rules often operate according to
sub-rules of their own, like when a character lies to all characters in all
scenes except one.)
[Ditto above.]
6) CONCLUSION: Gosh,
now that you've convinced me that it's true, what can I do with it?
(Answer: consider in your conclusion what further consequences might also
be true as a result of the readers' acceptance of your thesis--how will reading
the text this way improve the way we understand the author, the other characters, the
rest of the plot, the author's other works, the genre or kind of
work as practiced in other works of this era, or the genre of this
kind of work written in other eras).
7) Brilliant!
Where do I sign? (Answer:
Just below the $$$ on the endorsement line of the check.)